Curtis,
I have made all of the requested changes except changing the portlet title. It doesn't seem clearer to me but we can discuss it more before landing.
The incremental diff is at: http://pastebin.ubuntu.com/374657/
Thanks for the review and the great suggestions.
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Curtis,
I have made all of the requested changes except changing the portlet title. It doesn't seem clearer to me but we can discuss it more before landing.
The incremental diff is at: http:// pastebin. ubuntu. com/374657/
Thanks for the review and the great suggestions.