Merge lp://qastaging/~ted-m-cox/xubuntu-docs/command-line-edits into lp://qastaging/xubuntu-docs/trusty

Proposed by Ted Cox
Status: Merged
Merged at revision: 142
Proposed branch: lp://qastaging/~ted-m-cox/xubuntu-docs/command-line-edits
Merge into: lp://qastaging/xubuntu-docs/trusty
Diff against target: 15 lines (+2/-2)
1 file modified
desktop-guide/C/command-line.xml (+2/-2)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp://qastaging/~ted-m-cox/xubuntu-docs/command-line-edits
Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
Pasi Lallinaho (community) Approve
Review via email: mp+206854@code.qastaging.launchpad.net

Description of the change

desktop-guide/C/command-line.xml: Simplified the opening paragraph and added a colon following the last word before the first itemized list.

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Pasi Lallinaho (knome) :
review: Approve
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David Pires (slickymaster) wrote :

The way the proposed paragraph is written makes it too simplified and does not quite frames the use, or better the reason of such use, of the command line.
IMO the existing paragraph is perfect for what it's proposed, i.e. an introduction to the need of the use of the command line in Xubuntu and on how to do it, strictly speaking on the needs of an average user.

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