Merge lp://qastaging/~unit193/xubuntu-docs/cli into lp://qastaging/xubuntu-docs/trusty
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Unit 193
| Status: | Merged |
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| Merged at revision: | 137 |
| Proposed branch: | lp://qastaging/~unit193/xubuntu-docs/cli |
| Merge into: | lp://qastaging/xubuntu-docs/trusty |
| Diff against target: |
46 lines (+20/-5) 2 files modified
debian/changelog (+7/-0) desktop-guide/C/command-line.xml (+13/-5) |
| To merge this branch: | bzr merge lp://qastaging/~unit193/xubuntu-docs/cli |
| Related bugs: |
| Reviewer | Review Type | Date Requested | Status |
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| Jack Fromm (community) | Needs Fixing | ||
| Pasi Lallinaho (community) | Approve | ||
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Description of the change
Commit message said it all, just added more commands to the "Common Commands" section and re-ordered the list.
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| Pasi Lallinaho (knome) | # |
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I think the apt-cache, apt-get and wget entries need periods instead of commas to make new sentences at (...repository. Common...), (...in apt. Common...), (...locally. See man wget...) respectively.
Just my opinion, but I think it would be better to be consistent with the verbs; e.g., less says "View" but ls says "Lists". Either make them all 3rd person singular or all imperative (or infinitive, or whatever the heck that is).
In killall, "programs" should be "program's".